Most are writing their stories using their frameworks for reference

The students did not want to stop writing. Some are at the editing and proof reading stage. I started a workshop with another group today. Here is the Writing Assessment Checker. I started them on the ‘ Telescopic Text ‘ which they had already used with their amazing teacher Bonnie._ Filomena:Well anyways, we did end up [...]
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Albert:
Ive woken up sweating because of this.
(7 November 2016)

Albert:
I like the room cold, and i stated that on my room preferences, but my roommate keeps turning the air up to 78 which is way too hot.
(7 November 2016)

Albert:
So im a college freshman with roommate problems as expected.
(7 November 2016)

Berna:
Do you like the name Silvie?
(7 November 2016)

Cris:
Guys advise?
(7 November 2016)

Cris:
Also the only chances I do have of approaching him are when he is with his friends, what do you think?
(7 November 2016)

Cris:
I don't know if I should approach him since it seems like he stopped trying.
(7 November 2016)

Cris:
I want to talk to him, he is dating no one and does not go to any classes with me or lunch.
(7 November 2016)

Cris:
Every time he sees me he looks at me and then looks away like if he didn't notice, I think he still likes me but he ignores me when he sees me.
(7 November 2016)

Cris:
I began to get feelings, so I tried to smile when I see him and tell him hi.
(7 November 2016)