I found it to have very compelling world building with great depth and history

The style / prose can be clunky at times, but I got used to it by the end. A few of the characters come off feeling one dimensional. Terra’s (the main character) parents are the worst in that regard. Their reactions and personality are flat and they feel like throw aways to me._ Lea:I would also [...]
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Taina:
I am wondering what your advice is to me, and if you think she will continue being with me, or not?
(8 November 2016)

Taina:
She is still talking to me via text.
(8 November 2016)

Taina:
But, she says she needs to take the next couple of days to think of if she wants something more, or to continue with me, or not, because she is tired of defending herself and being accused of lying.
(8 November 2016)

Taina:
We aren't in a relationship yet, only dating.
(8 November 2016)

Taina:
But, she claims she has been truthful.
(8 November 2016)

Taina:
So, the past two months I have accused her of lying a bit.
(8 November 2016)

Tawna:
Papers to file a divorce from tdcj inmate?
(8 November 2016)

Tawna:
WHERE CAN I GET TEXAS DIVORCE FORMS ONLINE?
(8 November 2016)

Jordan:
This girl and I like eachother, seeing tomorrow at school, nervous?
(8 November 2016)

Jordan:
I'm so nervous and I know she is too.
(8 November 2016)